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Great job implementing the core logic to calculate and display the population data! The formatting works well. However, I'm requesting a couple of changes to make your code more robust by handling some important edge cases.

First, the code doesn't validate the parsed population value. If an element's text is not a valid number, parseInt will result in NaN, breaking the calculations. Please add a check to ensure you only add valid numbers to your total, as per requirement #2.

Second, if no population elements are found, the code attempts to divide by zero when calculating the average, which also results in NaN. Please add a check to prevent this, for instance, by ensuring the count of elements is greater than zero before you perform the division.

I also noticed a minor typo in a function name: toCurrectFormat should be toCorrectFormat. Addressing these points will make your solution complete!


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let count = 0;

populationArray.forEach((element) => {
const population = parseInt(element.textContent.replace(/,/g, ''), 10);

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Good job parsing the number. However, what happens if element.textContent is not a valid number (e.g., an empty string or just text)? parseInt would return NaN, which would make your total and average also NaN. Requirement #2 asks you to make sure the string can be converted. You could add a check to handle cases where population is not a valid number.

count++;
});

const average = Math.round(total / count);

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This calculation works well, but consider what happens if populationArray is empty. In that case, count would be 0, and total / count would result in NaN. It's good practice to guard against division by zero.

document.querySelector('.average-population').textContent =
toCurrectFormat(average);

function toCurrectFormat(number) {

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There's a small typo in the function name here. It looks like it should be toCorrectFormat.

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Review Summary

Excellent work! You've successfully addressed all the feedback from the previous review, resulting in a much more robust solution. The code now gracefully handles cases with invalid numbers and prevents division by zero, which is great to see. Your implementation now meets all the requirements perfectly. I am happy to approve these changes.


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