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[lucytrep]

• Keep the GIF
• Dashes are small and hard to notice
• Windows on a solid colored background for each article that is the same size of the GIF (create a box)

Not jarring when switching back and forth

• Keep the window white on-top of the solid colored background
• Likes the size of the headers on the front page
• Italics for the coloured text in the body
• Width of the paragraph is good
• Could add a different font
• Monospaced font, or having a script, using it in the body text as emphasis
• Back to Top button is good
• Can leverage the quote element more
• Break more of the body text up, cool sentence, call things out

Every character truly truly matters

• Likes the uppercase font, rather than italics, more punchy for the window moment
• Article 1 uppercase, new font for Article Title
• Too far apart, play around with a different font, same width as the window above, light grey? Not that important as it is secondary information
• Look at the rag, smaller font on mobile
• Tighten up line-height
• "Let's Begin" looks like a button, maybe don't use that background, use a different font, maybe handwritten, don't have to use the background
• Could on the homepage, have the Article legend look like tabs, or like a line and the tabs are coming out of it like a folder, on hover could slightly enlarge, seems like you are pulling them out
• Add under title, and add a slight preface "choose your article"
• First thing when you land on the site you understand the vibe and what the site is about
• Maybe add a slight written thing, "this site is about this, please explore these options", so the user knows exactly what they are going to click on
• Why are these articles all together, how can you add a slight subtext, summarize the intro, pull one small sentence that is prefacing with a little arrow and giving a small intro so they don't have to scroll down
• Have folders underneath