Michael Feedback #4
Description
- Three word titles, place remainder somewhere else
"Make those forms distinct but feel together"
- What Is Code?
- Post-Identity Design
- What Screens Want
- Typeset and editorialize, pull a single word out
- Beginning to manifest design across, then expecting a version of the GIF across
- Is there a way you bring that feeling across all pages, but don't actually use that image, don't want to see it repeated three-times, and will this feels necessarily different, you can still have the main page reference but then you are manifesting it in the type, the layout the color across the other pages, just the insp that lead to it
- Right now the pages feel quiet and then family relationship
- Is it a frame of the GIF, because the GIF is already dynamic or is there motion to do in the header on the pages so it feels like a connection?
- Don't over index on one thing
- Put a pin in the header and focus on;
- -Make sure the appetizer is not at the bottom of the landing page
- Feels like you are on an article right now
- Landing page version of the nav is not the same as the article navs (to give distinction)
- Don't do the whole text, give them a similar length
- Watch the time!
Important
- Give the expression with the three words
- Make sure they have a bit more ownership for the each of them
- Take that back into the landing page
- Vibe throughout the article and not too heavy on the title area