Feedback from Riya #2
Description
I liked the concept of dark room and how you used the colors red and black. Especially in the borders at the edges. I feel for differentiating the articles from one another you could try maybe flipping the colors from red on black to black on red, or maybe a page that is completely black n white (initial phase of a photograph) to tie in with the theme of the darkroom. You could also maybe try making each article like a phase in the development of a photograph. (This might be a stretch but let me know what you think).
Some other issues:
- In mobile i feel the header is very large because of this there is not enough space to read.
- I am not very sold on the readability of the typeface for the body since the colors are so bright. Especially on places where the paragraphs are completely bold, with the color it can be a bit vibraty.
- There were parts where the title was cut off.
- I loved the animation in the landing page, but kind of feel it makes it a bit difficult to read the heading. But, you did mention the heading a couple of times elsewhere like in each pages so I think that solves it a bit.
- Would like to see a bit of differentiation in the footer.
